still editing like a blue thread
Ok, so, two pages later, I stopped reading to research the name of an island because I did not reference it and thought that perhaps I should.
The main character is on her way to Osaka, Japan, and I wondered: in which of the Japanese islands is Osaka? I have been there and can’t believe I don’t remember. Did I not know? • Just read that Osaka is a city in the region of Kansai on the island of Honshu. So I clicked the Japan link to learn Honshu’s location among the other islands. Reading the names of the main islands of Japan (Hokkaido, Honshu, Shikoku, Kyushu, and Okinawa), I laughed out loud because of a long-ago memory.